[原创]念奴娇—贺新作《起屋》

西河摸鱼X子

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 44pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 22.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">念奴娇</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 44pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 22.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">—贺新作《起屋》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 32pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 16.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 32pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 16.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">　　</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                <span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="5">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 金风初沐，放眼望，处处硕果丰簇。尽展欢颜，因得读，立旭新作《起屋》。时已流逝，感念犹存，化为语如珠。心潮澎湃，一时几无言语。</font></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="5">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 遥想懵懂少年，早立雄志愿。指点大地，仰望苍天。眉宇间，鸿图定能得展！心坚志顽，奋力勇往前，雄愿初还。吾却深信，灿烂尚在明天。</font></span>

布衣

哈哈,看不出西河老师还有这么一手!佩服!把卢川老师美坏了该.

墨雨

<p>俺还没能有幸读到，</p><p>就不多说了。</p><p>不过看着这词作得确实不糙。</p>

西河摸鱼X子

<p>见笑，确是学之习作。多指教才是。</p><p>谢墨雨和布衣鼓励</p>