[原创] 莲语

筇林雪

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<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">在清浅的池塘看见你，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">坐着先秦的筏子，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">穿过魏晋的风雨，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">款款朝向我走。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p><font face="微软雅黑">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">我不是你的归宿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">我们中间隔着，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">唐宋的明月，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">还有民国的哀愁。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p><font face="微软雅黑">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">你不是我腕下的那朵，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">我的腕子已经生疏，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">我把盏，我烹茶，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">炼就翻云覆雨的手。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p><font face="微软雅黑">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">你来时华盖亭亭，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">你走后残雨淅沥，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">我是个无心的人，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">不喜</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">亦不忧。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p><font face="微软雅黑">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">远远地看你怒放，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">或者看你凋零，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">却无法作一只蜻蜓，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">偶尔落在上头。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p><font face="微软雅黑">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">你氤氲了我的清茶，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">我却食了你的根茎，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">等我偿还一副皮囊，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font face="微软雅黑">不知可否？</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

墙头马上

<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">莲<br/><br/><br/>被吟哦了千年<br/><br/>却不会住在文字里面<br/><br/>无拈花一笑的会意<br/><br/>承载的是别人的幽怨<br/><br/>你只需要<br/><br/>一场彼此能懂的<br/><br/>甚至什么都不需要懂的<br/><font face="微软雅黑"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><br/>当下的遇见</span></font></span></font></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-5-30 17:54:26编辑过]

效力

看了两遍的感觉：意境深远，意象清雅，节奏婉转。就是我还不明晰作者具体表达的意思。

傅培宏

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>效力</i>在2009-5-30 20:26:00的发言：</b><br/>看了两遍的感觉：意境深远，意象清雅，节奏婉转。就是我还不明晰作者具体表达的意思。 </div>
<p>真想知道，还是假想知道？？？？？？？？？？？？？我不告诉你！！！！！！！</p>

老芋头

应该加精的诗歌，虽然我说了不算

今生叹

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>老芋头</i>在2009-5-31 9:16:00的发言：</b><br/>应该加精的诗歌，虽然我说了不算 </div>
<p>这个，可以不加精！</p>

黑与白

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>今生叹</i>在2009-5-31 13:46:00的发言：</b><br/>
<p>这个，可以不加精！</p></div>
<p>我看着某些版主好任凭个人脾性玩弄精，且为此狂泻不止！</p>

又岸

真正无心无喜无忧，就不会去写诗来表达了。<br/><br/>不过，这首诗把一种莫名的情绪传达地很到位，怎么评价某篇文字的优与劣，我的观点：<br/><br/>很简单，读了后能触动你的某根神经甚而是某一片神经，调动读者的某一段人生经验体会。<br/><br/>读者看似是在读诗读文，读别人写的东西，本质上读到的仍是自己。

俗人

.......从来不顶帖子的哈........表扬一个......这个东西&nbsp;&nbsp; 要品的~~~~~~~~~

青浦

<p>我怎么就不会品呢？</p>

风中渴望

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>青浦</i>在2009-6-1 15:56:00的发言：</b><br/>
<p>我怎么就不会品呢？</p></div>
<p>自说自话，对壁而答。不寂寞吗？<br/><br/>QQ糖广告上说，俺老到了莫牙，俺不会品，但俺会“抿”滴。</p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-6-1 16:00:21编辑过]

今生叹

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>王泽妍</i>在2009-6-1 16:35:00的发言：</b><br/>左手江山右手美人——这是全天下男人的梦想吧？ </div>
<p>也不尽然。<br/>我的梦想是左手烟，右手茶，光吃菜，不说话。</p>

风中渴望

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>今生叹</i>在2009-6-2 14:53:00的发言：</b><br/>
<p><br/>我的梦想是左手烟，右手茶，光吃菜，不说话。</p></div>
<p>&nbsp;<br/>偶像级前辈，您的梦想也是俺们终生孜孜以求而不得的。</p>

今生叹

晕了，34岁，你的人生才刚刚开始，难道我43岁就成前辈了？

卢川

看着你们朝气蓬勃地打情骂俏，我妒忌。